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[Insert Bach related pun]

Very cool idea! I was surprised at how well the piece fit into the whole dance song aesthetic. A few thoughts:

It took a pretty long time for the song to get going. Maybe you kept it long as respect to Bach's masterpiece, but I think two minutes and twenty seconds is too long of an intro to a dance song.

Second, and this is little, the octave jumping stuff around 1 minute sounded a little weird to me. It might be the crappy speakers I'm using, but the low note really stuck out from everything else. Just a small thing I noticed.

Again, very cool idea and good execution!

joethesouleater responds:

yeah i noticed the octave thing too, im going to go in and fix it tomorrow, i kept the intro long mostly because i just love the intro haha. thanks for the review =]

loved it

i've always had a soft spot for acoustic guitars, and so of course i loved this. i also couldn't help but think that the riff from 24 seconds to 40 seconds would go great with some rock drums. just an idea :-)

decent

I, along with milkman, liked this song but something was bugging me about it. I might be wrong with this, but maybe to fix this leave in the drums when the other synth is playing. you did this towards the end of the loop.

Too all over the place

I'm going to admit that I only listened to the first minute and a half or so, then skipped along through the rest of the song, so my apologies if the ending is a masterpiece. Now, from what I did listen to, the song's main problem was that its simply too all-over-the-place. It sounded like a collection of loops, one after the other, that didn't necessarily compliment the other loops. Oh, and that cowbell is too loud.

Heya! I make music. Sometimes I submit it to Newgrounds, but sometimes I don't. Newgrounders have a very distinct taste in music. ;)

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